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I'm an apocalyptic mess.
Feathers have weakened,
my spine.

Fathers defeating your
Slate of counter-morals.
And grandsons fighting,
In your perfect dark ambience.

You slide along
Their dim sunshine.
Stars in long strands of hair.
Air –

Air, within a bolt of
Thickened smoke.

I'm a pivotal truth.
A potential socialite.
I'm the average placid child.
A protruding noise.
A prolific stride.
I'm the plastic hero,
In this poisonous state of mind.

I'm fickle.
Dainty.
Drained in his fortune
Of sins.

Her life,
Her subway train,
Filled with brains,
So politically innate.
An infrasonic plea.

You dive an impossible,
Trance of trenchant treasures,
And happy measures.

We will sit our lucky posture,
You & I.
My sixty-second genius
Flee the inner torture.


Let us finish in the pop culture.
©2006-2009 ~deaDKat
:icondeadkat:

Author's Comments

A jab at confessional poetry. With a special affection for the letter P.

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:iconsilentwalker81:
I really like this; especially the lines,

"You slide along
Their dim sunshine.
Stars in long strands of hair."
:iconarabianshepherd:
you i know i despise this.

and i'm a huge liar. like pinoccio (did i spell that right :P)
:iconchasingxaimee:
i enjoy this. :)

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+:aimee:+
:icondeadkat:
haha! I'm supposed to be obsessed with spelling, baaah! you fooled meeeee. Pinocchio. 0_0
:icondeadkat:
thanks for commenting. =)
:icondog-bites-back:
That's 'cos the letter P is AWESOME.

Great poem, thanks for sharing it (even though I've apparently seen it 9 years after its first posting or something).
:icondeadkat:
haha. and I've seen your comment almost a month later. even? =p thanks. =)

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